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One Plus One

They Say Love Only Last For A Moment But When I Look In His Eyes He Tell Me Something Different That Make Me Want To Fantasize He My Heart He My All But What Can I Do He The Person That Stands Before Me, And The Same Person That Make Me Feel Alive And People Say Numbers Never Lies So This Mean One Plus One Equal Two Unfortunate It Not ONLY Us In A Relationship But People That Judging Us.. Making It A FEW..

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Skat A

Date: 7/7/2016 1:07:00 AM

Awesome write....Luv.skat

Tamoiya Hill

Date: 10/8/2011 3:57:00 AM

I actually not a really good person to do grammar , and yes you right i did miss the "s' to make it plural.

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/8/2011 3:21:00 AM

Hi Tamolya, this has real potential, I think you have forgotten the "s" on the end of several words ie-1st line "Last" should be plural, 2nd line "tell" should be plural or did you mean it to sound that way? Lee