Tamoiya Hill Poet ABC

One Plus One

They Say Love Only Last For A Moment
But When I Look In His Eyes He Tell Me 
Something Different That Make Me Want To Fantasize
 
He My Heart 
 
He My All
But What Can I Do
He The Person That Stands Before Me,
And The Same Person That Make Me Feel Alive
 
And People Say Numbers Never Lies
So This Mean One Plus One Equal Two
Unfortunate It Not ONLY Us In A Relationship But
People That Judging Us..
Making It A FEW..

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Skat A July 7, 2016 at 1:07 AM Awesome write....Luv.skat

Tamoiya Hill October 8, 2011 at 3:57 AM I actually not a really good person to do grammar , and yes you right i did miss the "s' to make it plural.

Lee Ramage October 8, 2011 at 3:21 AM Hi Tamolya, this has real potential, I think you have forgotten the "s" on the end of several words ie-1st line "Last" should be plural, 2nd line "tell" should be plural or did you mean it to sound that way? Lee