One Petal

I watch at the last minute
a solitary petal falling
from the cracked bough
through thin glass of my window--
it rustles and  soars way high
along a grappled wind, 
sailng over the  chilly vale .
It aligns with a hundred other petals,
all  together waltzing in space.
Watching their unrehearsed dance
in glorious animation, a tear of awe
smudges my eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Otieng Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 12:20 PM
Congrats Banjo...nice poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 7:05 AM
The observations of a poet! Congrats!
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 10:43 PM
Congrats on your win, Banjo. Well done.
Onclaud Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 5:13 PM
wow, a sensitive write deserving 1st place citaion... sending my best congrats, banjo!
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