One Path

Our love
Is
Caring, sharing, living,
Giving, elevating,
Walking through life
Two hearts become
One 
Two hearts become
Walking through life
Giving, elevating,
Caring, sharing, living,
Is
Our love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chachere Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 11:56 PM
one path is a guildless future when the love is very true(: because the hearts lead the way. i hope your days are wonderful Audrey. ~Always&Forever Lynette
K. Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 8:06 PM
Really liked this palindrome of your, Audrey-- :) I think you've said quite a lot about your love in very few words-- very nice! Wish you the best if this is for the contest :) --nikko :) btw hope you're doing good, and sorry I wasn't able to come up with something for your contest :( , hopefully next time I can join it...wish you the best in the judging!
Rhinem Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 7:37 PM
.... ~ Smile, this soft moment of loves ideal expression of loves impressions is, perfect in part towards, every hearts hopes from another amid, loves dreams ~ Smile, "My Love to You Always," John!:) ~ On we go....
Rhinem Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 7:33 PM
Smile ~ Very gentle loving and flowing poem dear lady ~ "Hello Precious & Gifted Audrey Carey!!!" ~ Smile, I am sorry that I have failed to make it back to Your wonderful poetry as of late but, I have been a bit busy yet, I am glad to be here again today to view a piece of "Your Pretty Heart" ~ Smile, and, "Thank You," for Your kind and wonderful com today dear; meant a lot ~ ....Cont....
Spence Sr Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 12:00 PM
This is so excellent. I love this palindrome of walking, touching, loving, hearts as one. The images are so awesome. Great job! Joseph
Neels Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 12:31 PM
Absolutely love this piece Audrey, and the form is a plus, luv Wilma
Kendrick Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 11:38 AM
Good write is it suppose to be a Palindrome.If it is one for the contest good luck with this fine work..Thanks for commenting on my work and caring enough to ask about my health.I am having a two fold problem.I have a septal cyst on my right kidney.It has come on my kidney since Nov. of last year..It is less than an inch in size but it will have to be watch because it could lead to a more serious problem..I also have four degenetive disc in my lumbar area..Dr. says this is where my pain is ...SK
Brown Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 3:55 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Audrey. I wish you the best always. Love, Carol
Knop Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 2:08 AM
So well expressed and written, Audrey! Enjoyed reading your poem this morning. Thank you for your comments and have a nice day!...Love, Gert
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 7:15 PM
COOL one, Audrey. I like how it goes back to its beginning. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 6:31 PM
Hey my BFF .. I just posted a new blog with some vacation photos from Hawaii and a few from the seashore of Jersey.. we have taken hundred.but Soup holds so many at a time... so will post more in a few days... great inventions these cell phone internet and camera thing a ma jigs..enjoy a bit of island magic tonight and u can see my 'honey poo' too.. AlohA..BFF
Fox Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 2:23 PM
I took the left hand path by challenge ,your path is different but no more lovelier !
Devonshire Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 1:34 PM
Such a beautiful reflection of true love, Audrey. Brought tears to my eyes. And the form is amazing as well. Almost like a palindrome, but much deeper than those I've seen posted recently. Excellent work, Dimples! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 12:34 PM
Sure enough.. I can attest to every line.. I am walking it now and will enjoy it till it ends.. as everything does... AlohA.. sweet BFF.. enjoyed your sweet poetry this early morning in AlohA Land.. "Sweetheart"...
Thomas Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 11:59 AM
expertly crafted! nice one!
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