One Path

Our love Is Caring, sharing, living, Giving, elevating, Walking through life Two hearts become One Two hearts become Walking through life Giving, elevating, Caring, sharing, living, Is Our love

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 7/11/2010 11:56:00 PM

one path is a guildless future when the love is very true(: because the hearts lead the way. i hope your days are wonderful Audrey. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/9/2010 8:06:00 PM

Really liked this palindrome of your, Audrey-- :) I think you've said quite a lot about your love in very few words-- very nice! Wish you the best if this is for the contest :) --nikko :) btw hope you're doing good, and sorry I wasn't able to come up with something for your contest :( , hopefully next time I can join it...wish you the best in the judging!

John Rhinem

Date: 7/9/2010 7:37:00 PM

.... ~ Smile, this soft moment of loves ideal expression of loves impressions is, perfect in part towards, every hearts hopes from another amid, loves dreams ~ Smile, "My Love to You Always," John!:) ~ On we go....

John Rhinem

Date: 7/9/2010 7:33:00 PM

Smile ~ Very gentle loving and flowing poem dear lady ~ "Hello Precious & Gifted Audrey Carey!!!" ~ Smile, I am sorry that I have failed to make it back to Your wonderful poetry as of late but, I have been a bit busy yet, I am glad to be here again today to view a piece of "Your Pretty Heart" ~ Smile, and, "Thank You," for Your kind and wonderful com today dear; meant a lot ~ ....Cont....

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/9/2010 12:00:00 PM

This is so excellent. I love this palindrome of walking, touching, loving, hearts as one. The images are so awesome. Great job! Joseph

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/7/2010 12:31:00 PM

Absolutely love this piece Audrey, and the form is a plus, luv Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/7/2010 11:38:00 AM

Good write is it suppose to be a Palindrome.If it is one for the contest good luck with this fine work..Thanks for commenting on my work and caring enough to ask about my health.I am having a two fold problem.I have a septal cyst on my right kidney.It has come on my kidney since Nov. of last year..It is less than an inch in size but it will have to be watch because it could lead to a more serious problem..I also have four degenetive disc in my lumbar area..Dr. says this is where my pain is ...SK

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/7/2010 3:55:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Audrey. I wish you the best always. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/7/2010 2:08:00 AM

So well expressed and written, Audrey! Enjoyed reading your poem this morning. Thank you for your comments and have a nice day!...Love, Gert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2010 7:15:00 PM

COOL one, Audrey. I like how it goes back to its beginning. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/6/2010 6:31:00 PM

Hey my BFF .. I just posted a new blog with some vacation photos from Hawaii and a few from the seashore of Jersey.. we have taken hundred.but Soup holds so many at a time... so will post more in a few days... great inventions these cell phone internet and camera thing a ma jigs..enjoy a bit of island magic tonight and u can see my 'honey poo' too.. AlohA..BFF

Nigel Fox

Date: 7/6/2010 2:23:00 PM

I took the left hand path by challenge ,your path is different but no more lovelier !

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/6/2010 1:34:00 PM

Such a beautiful reflection of true love, Audrey. Brought tears to my eyes. And the form is amazing as well. Almost like a palindrome, but much deeper than those I've seen posted recently. Excellent work, Dimples! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/6/2010 12:34:00 PM

Sure enough.. I can attest to every line.. I am walking it now and will enjoy it till it ends.. as everything does... AlohA.. sweet BFF.. enjoyed your sweet poetry this early morning in AlohA Land.. "Sweetheart"...

Ryan Thomas

Date: 7/6/2010 11:59:00 AM

expertly crafted! nice one!