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Originally written in Feb 2009 after I heard that a third of the homeless folks were veterans and a ninth were combat veterans.  I read this at a poetry slam in Monterey CA 20150219 and won first prize $20.

That homeless guy out on the corner, Carrying a sign that says he’s hungry; Maybe he’s just a drunk or a ‘stoner’, But he might be that one-out-of-three. That one-out-of-three is a veteran, Who in uniform served his country. There’s a good chance he has an addiction, Or is still suffering from PTSD. One out of three of those ones-out-of-three Fought in one of America’s wars. Did he scream on a beach in Normandy, Or did he at Inchon go ashore. Did he hunt Charlie in a rice paddy? Was he in the Balkans, or lost in the sand? One out of three of those ones-out-of-three, Were the heroes who once took a stand. If you can spare a few dollars, then feed them. If not, at least hear what they say. Their country may no longer need them, But they don’t deserve to be thrown away. They might not have all bled in battle, But each one came home a casualty. With your help, they may someday be able To leave the ranks of the one-out-of-three.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/6/2015 6:11:00 PM
Hi Mark, as you can see I was able to find it, lol. This speaks directly to my heart and the message that I wish to send. Thank you for writing this excellent piece on one of the most important social disgraces of our first world country. I want to stand on a street corner with a sign!! Please 'adopt' this vet into your heart. He needs you now.... much love, Kimberly
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Date: 9/26/2014 2:34:00 PM
oh oh oh i love this poem, this is pure and spiritual, one out of the three should be read all over the globe, respect i love this poem richard
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Date: 5/25/2014 11:30:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win!!!
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Date: 5/24/2014 8:39:00 AM
Uniquely written about a great topic..Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/24/2014 10:04:00 AM
Thanks. I felt that one while doing it. I tried to give it to the VA, but never heard back from them.
Date: 5/23/2014 9:22:00 PM
Congrats on the win!!
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/23/2014 11:27:00 PM
Thanks. This was one that I felt moved to write.
Date: 5/23/2014 12:43:00 AM
What a tremendous write to this subject... I know many soldiers that have returned from war...congrats on the win
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Date: 5/23/2014 11:27:00 PM
Thanks. This was one that I felt moved to write.
Date: 5/22/2014 9:41:00 PM
Hello Mark, hope you are well today? Congratulations, I hope you enjoy your win and placement.... Stop by my latest blog, "The Glass SLipper" if you'd like. Take Care, and enjoy a smile or two. XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 5/19/2014 12:18:00 AM
Wow! Not a very poetic responds to such a touching poem, but no other word would come to mind. We share a great appreciation and respect for our veterans.. Peace to you.
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Date: 5/19/2014 12:23:00 AM
Thanks. On the positive side, you might like The Soldiers Foreign Woman, and Like The finest Of Wines, both about my wife and I.
Date: 5/14/2014 1:54:00 AM
Hi Mark, This was one of the best poems I've read in a long time. It certainly talked to my heart and my soul. Thank you Mark for sharing tghis and for writing it. Love and Peace, Dborah
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Date: 5/14/2014 9:35:00 AM
Again, glad you liked it. It was inspired by a statistic I heard about the number of homeless people being veterans. Thanks for commenting.

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