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One of the Lucky Ones

Hope I'm not putting a big hex on myself But till now I've had no serious medical problems Don't know how many can say that at seventy-eight But you can place me in the “fortunate” column Haven't done anything out of the ordinary Thinking maybe I inherited some very good genes My whole family before me all lived to a ripe old age So what's this guy... a can of baked beans! Seven sisters all lived longer than eighty A pattern seems to have been established here Don't want to break the spell or cause any problems I'll just motor along and have another beer Don't think I'd like to be around at one hundred Soiling my jockey and mumbling away Just wheel me out to the back veranda in the sun And forget me for a couple of days © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 3/23/2014 9:37:00 AM
You sure your not thirty something Jack, my hero, I wanna be like you when I grow up. : )
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/23/2014 5:40:00 PM
I'm a hero!!! YEEHAW!!! Sometimes wish I was young again but I'm a happy old geezer! Had a fantastic life! XOXOX
Date: 3/18/2014 1:14:00 PM
wow! ..congratulations, Jack!!! ..to reach the ripe old age is more than winning a billions... HEALTH is WEALTH they said... and for your legacy.. that'll sure won't be forgotten... :')) my honor to meet you here in PS.. ^__^ loves, AiyaH :)))
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/18/2014 7:28:00 PM
What an absolute sweetie you are!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And your avatar is adorable... you have no idea what your kind words mean to me! You're adorable!!! Big big hugs and tons of love! Jack XOXOXOX
Date: 3/18/2014 11:57:00 AM
Forgetting Jack is not that easy! May you live to a ripe old age...and I'll drink to that :) // paul
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/18/2014 7:25:00 PM
Well thanks a whole big bunch my good friend, Paul! I'm drinking to it too! Cheers!
Date: 3/18/2014 10:40:00 AM
In my family you live to (87 to 107) or else (40's to the 50's). With 5 surgery's and 2 pace makers. I'm lucky to be living now, and not an earlier time! Dragon agrees, He wants me to spread the news that: ' Dragon's here!". Hah! He thinks I'm senile! Silly Dragon! You might say that hard headed acorn doesn't fall far from the tree, or into it! And at only 2 years old. Don't worry. I'll hold on. Can you imagine the mischief Dragon'd get into without ME! Trust me, you're lucky I'm here... LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/18/2014 7:23:00 PM
Longevity is all fine and good as long as I have the genes on my mother side... my daddy died young! Wow! 107... I have an aunt who's 104! XOXOXOX
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