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One of the Guys

Here he comes, bringing up the rear So proud to be one of the guys Blowing me kisses drenched in beer As he wolfs down several pies One tortured attempt at a promising leer Whilst he fumbles with his flies He’s no idea that I’m sat here Planning my goodbyes!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/27/2025 7:22:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/25/2016 7:02:00 PM
SUSAN, Excellent written poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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Date: 8/29/2014 2:19:00 PM
welcome to soup Susan a humorous poem well written hugs
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Date: 8/18/2014 12:01:00 PM
Write those goodbyes in poetic ink. Fine write....
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