Curtis Moorman Poet Rhyme

One, Nine, and Sixteen

ONE, NINE AND SIXTEEN

The sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust
For Grandma, this machine was a must
She would work long into the night
Making sure each stitch turned out right

The clothes she made, we were proud to wear
Not ashamed to be seen anywhere
Then one day, tragedy struck from afar
And many of our men marched off to war

The war years seemed like only yesterday
Countless lives were lost along the way
The lives that kept America free
From peril of those across the sea

Then one day, tragedy struck again
Grandma died  ....  our closest friend
Gone from us, the brightest spark
The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark

13 April 2018

For the contest sponsored by Viv Wigley

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Joyce Johnson May 2, 2018 at 5:22 PM This is a great poem. Could have been the top winner. These poems are all good. Joyce Curtis Moorman May 3, 2018 at 9:27 AM Joyce, what a marvelous acclamation! I had hoped it would have received a higher placement, but I am also pleased and humbled that it placed at all. I agree that all the poems entered in Viv's contest are good. I applaud the authors of each one. Thank you for your support.

Jan Allison May 2, 2018 at 4:08 PM Dropping back to say many congratulations on your win Curtis:-) hugs Jan xx Curtis Moorman May 3, 2018 at 9:22 AM So sweet of you, Jan! You always come through and it always boosts my spirits. Thanks!!

Susan Gentry May 2, 2018 at 12:42 PM Congratulations on your placement with this poem full of wonderful imagery. I like the love of family shown here. Enjoyed. Curtis Moorman May 3, 2018 at 9:22 AM Susan, thank you for such kind remarks. I appreciate your continued inspiring support.

Line Gauthier May 2, 2018 at 7:45 AM Congrats, Curtis. Well written. Curtis Moorman May 3, 2018 at 9:21 AM As always, thanks, Line! Your support and encouragement is much appreciated.

Jan Allison April 13, 2018 at 6:13 AM Fabulous imagery Curtis you incorporated Viv's lines so well into your descriptive poem. I expect many of the poems will be sad and will follow a similar theme to yours. good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Curtis Moorman April 13, 2018 at 9:58 AM Thanks, Jan! I agree, many will perhaps follow this same pattern as seen in my poem. In essence, I hope they do simply to show how much they loved their family member and their country. You will never know how much I value your support. You keep me encouraged, and I appreciate it.