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One Night Stand

Okay, Rudolph its all up to your red nose now so lets get it on!

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/19/2009 7:05:00 PM

expressive, tantalizingly funny! Jim

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/30/2008 4:45:00 PM

I'm speechless. john

Amy Swanson

Date: 12/29/2008 3:15:00 PM

Hi Sue, this is really cute and clever! :) I loved it. Thanks for your kind congrats on "My Little Girl" it was appreciated. God bless and have a wonderful new year! :) Amy

Date: 12/28/2008 6:02:00 PM

Cute poem! The title really adds to the poem. Nice use of just three lines. I enjoyed it. Karen

Michael Torres

Date: 12/26/2008 11:06:00 PM

Clever and funny Sue you put a smile on my face. Happy new year to you and all you love. GBU Michael

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/26/2008 4:29:00 PM

Sue - just realized i missed these three clever and enjoyable Senryu's! Leave it to Fred...is all I can say about his comment- ~lol~ Anywho - delightful to read! Hope your holiday season is awesome and your 2009 rocks in every way! hugs, me xoxo

Robin L. Gass

Date: 12/26/2008 1:40:00 PM

Awesome senyru. I love this very clever poem. Happy holidays! Love Robin

Nathaniel Köhp

Date: 12/26/2008 7:13:00 AM

Also in reply to Wilfredo, it's all metaphor, dear.

Nathaniel Köhp

Date: 12/26/2008 7:11:00 AM

This made me laugh so hard. Maybe it's just my dirty mind. :P Brilliant senryu, Sue. Also thanks for your very kind comments! I'm flattered :D Also, I hope you had a good Christmas! Nathaniel

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/24/2008 11:57:00 PM

Nice senryu Sue, The true words of Santa...Raul

Wilfredo Derequito

Date: 12/24/2008 10:18:00 PM

I'm not exactly sure but as far as I know based on my experience, people use only moving bodily parts during one-night stands! Surely not a nose, heaven's sake, whether it's colored red, violet, whatever! I think what you write, Sue, is just not realistic...(unless of course if a new way of doing things with the use of a nose has recently been invented!) LOL Fred

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/24/2008 6:25:00 PM

Lol..I will pay to see..lol..I loved it!