One Neighborly Tree

One Autumn  afternoon, I was forced to stall.
Across the street on a corner lawn very small,
stood a tree most beautiful and noticed by all.
Each fall I enjoyed its breathtaking autumn display.
That is, until four years ago when I moved away.
Its memory arrested and captured me a few days ago.
I was compelled to drive through my old neighborhood                                       to experience once more that autumn tree, one of my favorite shows.
But when I arrived and turned the corner, I was saddened because that  lovely tree, once so generously covered with orange leaves, was no longer there.
Its unsightly root system protruded above ground and disfigured  the small lawn.  It was then I understood why the tree had to go; but still, I regretted that I could no longer stare.  I shall not forget those few years and brief moments we shared. It seemed that tree and I embraced each other with such a neighborly care.                                                                                                

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Date: 11/11/2016 12:21:00 AM
I can relate to the feelings that you had for this lovely tree Curtis. I planted a tree, a palm tree, when our daughter was born. Whenever she was in town she would go visit and she would know that she and the tree with the same age. The last time she visited, the tree was gone and she felt so sad. I guess the new owners just didn't want the tree there any longer for some reason. Congratulations on having this lovely poem honored with POTD! 7 ; )
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Date: 11/8/2016 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations :)
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 11/10/2016 1:45:00 PM
Thank you heidi
Date: 11/8/2016 11:45:00 AM
congratulations
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Date: 11/10/2016 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Yasemin
Date: 11/8/2016 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Curtis. Nice poem, a little sad to me.
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Date: 11/10/2016 1:47:00 PM
Thank you Daniel for your comments.
Date: 11/8/2016 7:08:00 AM
Hi Curtis, There's just something about basking in nature and partaking of it's wonder. You did that with that beautiful tree. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/10/2016 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Alexis for your encouraging comments.
Date: 11/8/2016 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD honors Curtis...
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Date: 11/10/2016 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Charlie.
Date: 11/8/2016 3:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD... Beautifully described... Trees are our best friends... I enjoyed your poem...
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Date: 11/10/2016 2:29:00 PM
Thank you Supraja. Your comments are appreciated.
Date: 11/8/2016 2:58:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Curtis - A great poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/10/2016 2:33:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine for your compliments.
Date: 11/8/2016 1:31:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Curtis:) trees make the world beautiful and you've pointed out aptly how they can affect us:) well written:)
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Date: 11/10/2016 2:35:00 PM
Hi Jo. I appreciate your compliment. GBU.
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