One Neighborly Tree

One Autumn  afternoon, I was forced to stall.
Across the street on a corner lawn very small,
stood a tree most beautiful and noticed by all.
Each fall I enjoyed its breathtaking autumn display.
That is, until four years ago when I moved away.
Its memory arrested and captured me a few days ago.
I was compelled to drive through my old neighborhood                                       to experience once more that autumn tree, one of my favorite shows.
But when I arrived and turned the corner, I was saddened because that  lovely tree, once so generously covered with orange leaves, was no longer there.
Its unsightly root system protruded above ground and disfigured  the small lawn.  It was then I understood why the tree had to go; but still, I regretted that I could no longer stare.  I shall not forget those few years and brief moments we shared. It seemed that tree and I embraced each other with such a neighborly care.                                                                                                

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Marcum Wong Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 12:21 AM
I can relate to the feelings that you had for this lovely tree Curtis. I planted a tree, a palm tree, when our daughter was born. Whenever she was in town she would go visit and she would know that she and the tree with the same age. The last time she visited, the tree was gone and she felt so sad. I guess the new owners just didn't want the tree there any longer for some reason. Congratulations on having this lovely poem honored with POTD! 7 ; )
Sands Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Congratulations :)
Johnson Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Thank you heidi
Balandi Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 11:45 AM
congratulations
Johnson Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 1:46 PM
Thank you Yasemin
Turner Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Congratulations on POTD Curtis. Nice poem, a little sad to me.
Johnson Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Thank you Daniel for your comments.
Y. Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 7:08 AM
Hi Curtis, There's just something about basking in nature and partaking of it's wonder. You did that with that beautiful tree. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis
Johnson Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 1:48 PM
Thanks Alexis for your encouraging comments.
Smith Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 7:04 AM
Congratulations for POTD honors Curtis...
Johnson Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 1:50 PM
Thank you Charlie.
Kannan Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 3:14 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD... Beautifully described... Trees are our best friends... I enjoyed your poem...
Johnson Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Thank you Supraja. Your comments are appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 2:58 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Curtis - A great poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Johnson Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Thank you Sunshine for your compliments.
Daniel Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 1:31 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Curtis:) trees make the world beautiful and you've pointed out aptly how they can affect us:) well written:)
Johnson Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 2:35 PM
Hi Jo. I appreciate your compliment. GBU.
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