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One Nature Tanka

wafting in prisms
silent kaleidoscope dreams
birth infinite seeds 
rise upon the lilting breeze
beyond clouds of star dust

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Beata Agustin

July 13, 2024 at 4:01 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Noah Dugan

May 9, 2017 at 9:14 PM

Psychedelic, refreshing lines. Massive and yet ephemeral.

Noah Dugan

May 9, 2017 at 9:14 PM

Psychedelic, refreshing lines. Massive and yet ephemeral.

Andrea Dietrich

August 6, 2016 at 9:37 PM

I see you won with this.Had to say congratulations!

Michael Dom

August 6, 2016 at 10:20 PM

Thanks, Andrea :-)

Paul Callus

August 6, 2016 at 9:07 AM

This is very lovely, Michael, and I feel that it merited an even higher placing. Congrats on your win. // paul

Michael Dom

August 6, 2016 at 10:20 PM

Thanks, Paul. I was drawn into the subject poem's imagery and provided my own interpretation rather than an extrapolation of its inspiration, so I guess using the same terms in the stanza was not entirely 'original'.