Brandy Megens Poet I do not know?

One Nation

peace enpowers our souls
the                             racisim is abolished
    flag                      homelessness is the past               
        blows                drug wars are non-existed
in                               prostitution is forgotten
  the                            the economy is better than ever
      wind                        we stand a proud country
                                  

as
  our
     proud                                       liberty still prevails
                                                             and justice for all
nation                                            we the people
        sings                                                        are still for our people
              outloud                             and do our fathers proud!!!!!!!!! 

fireworks
           light
                up
the
    night
          light

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James Fraser May 14, 2009 at 3:11 PM Cleverly scripted brandy, and shaped. Top of the class for this patriotic write, James.

Colin Mitchell Williams May 13, 2009 at 2:42 PM Hi Brandy.... very clever, love the split style ( sorry don't know what else to call it ) very original ... wonderful poetry

Carolyn Devonshire May 13, 2009 at 2:05 PM We look forward to the days when homelessness and drugs no longer take their toll on Americans, Brandy. I can "see" the flag waving in the lines on the left side. What a great read as Memorial Day approaches! Love, Carolyn

Edward Orozco May 13, 2009 at 2:04 PM This is beautiful! And I fully agree with your point of view! - jeremiah