One More Time

The voyage long, begun at dawn, and then
the winged beast of metal rolls wheels to ground,
loved ones, inside and out, bear only grins,
and recount old tales of "remember whens?"
The hours of waiting fast recede, unwound,
as passengers embrace their long lost kin,
they grab their bags, head toward waiting cars
with hope and faith, forget the "might have beens."
"Worth the wait?" said Gram, Gramp smiles without a sound.
His son beams at 'the wife' and passes round cigars.
The world is right and bright again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 2, 2012 at 12:33 AM
dg... Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's waiting contest... what a WAIT..lol ;-) ~xox PD
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 2:03 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wait" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Arowolo Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 7:57 AM
Awesome and wonderful piece,Debbie.Congratulations on your superb win......Thanks for your help and encouragement always...Light and love...dear one
May Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 9:55 AM
lovely poem...congrats on your win
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 9:25 AM
congrats Debbie on a splendid write and win luv.. been dealing with lots of health issues lately.. sorry for late reply and congrats to u.. thinking of u always..
Onclaud Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 7:50 AM
ending in such sweet note, debbie...congrats on your splendid win.. :) huggs!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 1:37 AM
Congratulations on your win Debbie, nice one xx
Rozario Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 12:33 AM
Congrats on your big win Debbie...superb sonnet!!!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 5:55 PM
Love this hopeful write, Debbie! Congrats on another wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Ruebel Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 2:58 PM
Loving it Debbie, a most wonderful write as always. Congratulations on your win Lov, Shar
Williams Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 2:48 PM
Debbie congrats on your win, great poem and way to travel...David
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 12:10 AM
oh, for those good old days. My mom just loved travelling this way, Debs. What an awesome subject for a curtail sonnet!
Collins Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 6:53 AM
Dear Debbie - This poem is so fantastic! The way you roll out such simple words from such original thought is a gift. love, Kathy
Wesley Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 8:24 PM
Winged beast gave me the hint I needed; the landing sounds great with loved ones waiting. :)
Ryerson Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 3:09 PM
I love this Deb!...I like your description of a passenger plane and the last line is a beaut...gotta look this sonnet form up...love the rhyme scheme - Tim
Mac Donald Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 2:26 PM
Enjoyed this write, Debs!:) Sounds like a great and worthwhle trip for all present! Hope your weather is great and you've tons of people coming to you for help and relaxation! Quite here, only the snores of Kiwi happening.:) Best wishes, Love, Mikki
Nutter Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 6:05 AM
Takes me back to another time and place, loved the write.
B Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 9:02 PM
A lovely poem, bursting with a sense of nostalgia. I truly enjoyed reading this, it gave me a sense of the way things were with some optimism for the way things will be. Great poem, thank you for sharing.
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