One More Thing

one more thing the guy said
she has no hair
herman was stunned.
what?

she doesn’t believe in it.
she thinks it makes women vain.
she shaves her off.  Okay, Herman says.

not wanting to meet her at all.
wishing he had not agreed to a blind date
until he sees her eyes.
kindest hazel he has ever seen.
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Hankins Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 9:08 PM
Interesting, Caren. Of course, it takes more than one feature to spell beauty.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 9:08 PM
exactly right!
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