One More Memory

To mine let it be true
Can I ask one thing of you
One last memory is all I say is it too much
I daze to see your face, I tremble in your embrace
I shed a tear for you please thine be true
One more memory of your body to caress and nothing less
I need you now tonight will it be right
I see the changing of the leaves
I feel the birds begin to fly
and I softly mention to you should I take another ride
To mine let it be true one more memory is all I ask of you
My heart it feels so sorrowful to see you in this winter will you be shy
I feel the motion of the planets realign in our eyes
I designate my shadow just to feel alive
For a pigeon knows her shadow and for that it may be enough
But for me its a reflection in a memory that must show up
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 12/21/2011 4:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win in Brian's contest Amy. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/19/2011 10:56:00 AM
Amy you have mistakenly entered this in the holiday acrostic challenge contest, it is not an acrostic and therefore does not qualify, kindly remove it and if you would like to write an acrostic for the contest please read the contest rules
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