One More Day;

Every day and every night, 
i toss and turn in a sleepless fight. 
In my heart and on my mind, 
in my dreams, it's you i'll find.
One more day is all i need,
but one more day won't make you see.
You're all i want,
you're all i need;
just one more day is all i plead.
For every day i spend with you,
more and more our love will brew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A  Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 11:17 PM
PAYTEN, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your awesome words today. ~SKAT~
Brown Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 6:39 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Payten. If you would like to have more of your poetry read try to limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Swackhamer Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 11:32 AM
This is great, this is exactly what im feeling right now, the love of my life and i had a big fight he said he needed space told me we wernt breaking up that he just needed to get some crap done to help us get on our feet, im worried though cause i cant get ahold of him worried that it was his way of breaking up with me without having to see me hurt...this poem touches me deeply. thank you!
Murphy Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 9:20 AM
very nice and sweet welcome to poetry soup faleshia
Palli Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 12:04 PM
Lovely words.
Sohn Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 10:27 AM
oh to experience the happy side of love. Nothing can parallel that feeling. Enjoyed this read. I have a lot of poems with similar themes. Please read/comment my poems.
A   Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 5:01 AM
one more day you deserve, niceo oen
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