One More Chance

A beautiful morning it was, the sun itself sang out to the world, giving off much warmth
A few clouds were seen far off into the horizon, not a single tears from the sky fell
Windy yet a peaceful soothing breeze swept across his face, was he sobbing he couldn't tell
He spoke unto The Lord seeking his mercy, crying out his eyes for aid

Traffic lights evolved from red to a life full green
A prayer answered, such sight, unlike anything he had ever seen
Billboards spoke out in signs ofcourse, a facinating message, for it yelled out art
Right there and then he knew the outcome might be somewhat positive, a feeling that fortified his heart

Bulky and unpleasent, the knott that sat upon his throat
Sweety palms, shaky vision, anxiety arose beyond reasonable limits
He paused to his own will
He had to speak, word by word he spoke of his plan, and hope stood still

He questioned the heavens themselves, seeing himself dry of speech
Begging his soul, pleaing for a third opportunity, to make things right
As he spoke his heart took flight
A powerful feeling struck his eyes for fear would not let him breech

"Father" he spoke out into the emptyness, will You deliver me from this strife
Again and again he asked for aid, for a sign of hope
Slightly letting go, short ran the rope
He firmly stood, strongly speaking, asking for a chance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Tugaff Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 3:44 PM
Eduardo, this is an awesome write, intillengently penned from the heart. Thank you for your warm comment my friend. Ernilando
Bingham Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 7:25 PM
This is an awesome write. The thing that gets me is how easy it was to change who I really was. Eduardo when you don't even like yourself that is bad. It is just a wonderful feeling to know that no matter how low we sink Jesus will throw us a lifering, God Bless my friend, Ron
Christian Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 10:34 AM
aww a great poem, every one deserves a chance and God gives us all that , he accepts all who come to him, God bless from diane
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace