One More Car

She is freezing but she gets into one more car.
It has been a slow night.
She will help this lonely man feel less lonely
And she will have more money to feed her
Waiting six-year-old boy.
He is hungry.
And so is she.
If she has just a little more they will have a 
Better Christmas.
She makes lively conversation.
She is sweet.
But he is not lonely
And she never makes it home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 9:23 PM
Poignantly painted episode of the darkness that is night. Chilling! :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 2:05 AM
Thank you.That is exactly what I hoped.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Wow. Potent pen. x
Krutsinger Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 2:05 AM
Thank you Maureen.
Michael Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 6:06 AM
In the hunt for food, you may get eaten...It's a jungle out there...
Krutsinger Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 2:06 AM
It truthfully is.
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