Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

One Moonlit Road Collab

Sitting under the moon so bright, 
Our eyes locked in a midnight minute. 
Our hearts collided and we were one. 
As young love had now begun. 
Blinded by love and by passion, 
Her heart had been shattered. 
Her future had been taking away in an instant. 

Walking aimlessly on roads not straight.
Dried up kisses that dissolved with fate.
I measured love from heights to tall.
Leaving hopeless dreams that we're left to fall.
I stand alone with shoulders empty.
But the cracks of a heart will mend and be free.

Moonlight shines against the darkness of the road
Showing the way to travel home
So many questions left unanswered
But a longing to be free
No more loving words entwined with lie's
Broken promises weaved into my soul like a work of art
I wish I knew hurt was your lovers disguise
Id of saved my tears and stopped my cries
No more toying with the frayed stitching of my life
When you wrapped yourself round my heart
I should of stopped it from the start.
~*~
I stand alone, happy to be me
Free..

By Cory Long, Michael J. Falotico & Tracie Edwards (collab)

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John Aaron Green January 8, 2012 at 9:01 AM just making my rounds,,as im not on here everyday,,but as i told cory,,wow,,amazing,,this is somthing special,,and was one of my first read poems today,,and i thought it was just awesome......

Debra Squyres January 7, 2012 at 7:18 AM An outstanding collab !! Enjoyed reading this poem this morning . Rather sad...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 6, 2012 at 11:15 PM GREAT COLLAB.. GOOD LUCK TO TWO WONDERFUL POETS AND FRIENDS OF THIS SWEETHEART.. PROMISE TO TRY TO CATCH UP ON ALL POETRY MICHAEL... FOREVER AND ALWAHYS JG..XOXO..

Red Fiery January 6, 2012 at 10:36 AM A BREATH TAKING PIEVE BY THREE GREAT WRITERS...CHEERS ! mICHAEL UR JUST AWESOME...

Suzanne C. Goudreau January 5, 2012 at 9:03 AM A collaboration from the three of you superbly delivered. Moving, touching and very sad...

Suzanne C. Goudreau January 5, 2012 at 9:01 AM A very moving and captivating read. I could feel your emotions pour down the page as I read this poem through both of your collaboration. A sad and poignant read. Love hurts...sometimes! Happy New Year and thank you for sharing.

Patricia Edwards January 3, 2012 at 11:48 AM This is a very emotional write. I could feel the words as a read them. A very deep expression of the heart Good Job!

Tracy Edwards January 3, 2012 at 4:48 AM I love the way it flows from one to another.. A big thanks to Cory and yourself xxx Luv Tracie

Cory Long January 2, 2012 at 8:41 PM this was such a fun piece to write with you and tracie. I needed something to take my mind off things and this did even if for a short while.. always a pleasure michael and look forward to many more. cory