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One Moonlit Road collab

Sitting under the moon so bright, Our eyes locked in a midnight minute. Our hearts collided and we were one. As young love had now begun. Blinded by love and by passion, Her heart had been shattered. Her future had been taking away in an instant. Walking aimlessly on roads not straight. Dried up kisses that dissolved with fate. I measured love from heights to tall. Leaving hopeless dreams that we're left to fall. I stand alone with shoulders empty. But the cracks of a heart will mend and be free. Moonlight shines against the darkness of the road Showing the way to travel home So many questions left unanswered But a longing to be free No more loving words entwined with lie's Broken promises weaved into my soul like a work of art I wish I knew hurt was your lovers disguise Id of saved my tears and stopped my cries No more toying with the frayed stitching of my life When you wrapped yourself round my heart I should of stopped it from the start. ~*~ I stand alone, happy to be me Free.. By Cory Long, Michael J. Falotico & Tracie Edwards (collab)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/8/2012 9:01:00 AM
just making my rounds,,as im not on here everyday,,but as i told cory,,wow,,amazing,,this is somthing special,,and was one of my first read poems today,,and i thought it was just awesome......
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Date: 1/7/2012 7:18:00 AM
An outstanding collab !! Enjoyed reading this poem this morning . Rather sad...
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Date: 1/6/2012 11:15:00 PM
GREAT COLLAB.. GOOD LUCK TO TWO WONDERFUL POETS AND FRIENDS OF THIS SWEETHEART.. PROMISE TO TRY TO CATCH UP ON ALL POETRY MICHAEL... FOREVER AND ALWAHYS JG..XOXO..
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Date: 1/6/2012 10:36:00 AM
A BREATH TAKING PIEVE BY THREE GREAT WRITERS...CHEERS ! mICHAEL UR JUST AWESOME...
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Date: 1/5/2012 9:03:00 AM
A collaboration from the three of you superbly delivered. Moving, touching and very sad...
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Date: 1/5/2012 9:01:00 AM
A very moving and captivating read. I could feel your emotions pour down the page as I read this poem through both of your collaboration. A sad and poignant read. Love hurts...sometimes! Happy New Year and thank you for sharing.
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Date: 1/3/2012 11:48:00 AM
This is a very emotional write. I could feel the words as a read them. A very deep expression of the heart Good Job!
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Date: 1/3/2012 4:48:00 AM
I love the way it flows from one to another.. A big thanks to Cory and yourself xxx Luv Tracie
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Date: 1/2/2012 8:41:00 PM
this was such a fun piece to write with you and tracie. I needed something to take my mind off things and this did even if for a short while.. always a pleasure michael and look forward to many more. cory
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