Larry Bradfield Poet Than-Bauk

One Man's Life -Tb

His life seemed short
Just one long day
No night for play

But it was good
That's what he thought
But she just frowned

And found a man
A real live man
Who lived at night

1-27-19
Contest: Than Bauk
Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Jan Allison February 13, 2019 at 3:51 PM many congrats on your win Larry:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina February 10, 2019 at 9:30 PM Larry, your rhyme scheme was off so I had to place you at the bottom. Thanks for entering my contest...Charlie Larry Bradfield February 10, 2019 at 9:55 PM For some reason(age?) I misread the instructions and wrote something weird! If you do another of this type I'll nail it next time!.LOL...Thanks for your mercy and leniency, Charles!