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One man in my life

One man in my life That keeps me alive Here on earth Is my Father He gave me lots of feelings When he made me A long time ago With his holy hands I am also glad that I live here on earth Also my father inspires Me to write poems Also I am very happy That I am the oldest child Of my Father Also I write different poems For my Father Every single day And after I finish writing my poems My Father rewards me For a well done job

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Date: 12/1/2024 5:07:00 PM
Beautifully blended. The gradual description of the basic carnal needs of both the wolf and the lamb in the center of the poem is engaging.
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