One man in my life

One man in my life
That keeps me alive
Here on earth
Is my Father
He gave me lots of feelings
When he made me
A long time ago
With his holy hands
I am also glad that
I live here on earth
Also my father inspires
Me to write poems
Also I am very happy
That I am the oldest child
Of my Father
Also I write different poems
For my Father
Every single day
And after I finish writing my poems
My Father rewards me
For a well done job
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December 1, 2024 at 5:07 PM
Beautifully blended. The gradual description of the basic carnal needs of both the wolf and the lamb in the center of the poem is engaging.
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