One Love, One Life

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Written from the perspective of a man.

I gazed at your beauty and your hair cascading, You glanced at me- O, he is handsome, this man; Your sensuous lips so tempting, captivating, I laughed and it was a deep rumbling laugher. And this was the beginning of our love affair, Your family would not approve of this pairing; On a ship leading you to a life of despair, So we met in secret, making love and talking. As the ship entered port you slipped me your address, I let go of fate gifted love- reluctantly; We have been corresponding, our words a caress, O the torture of distance, what of destiny. I will never forget our gifted nights of bliss, So a secret journey I have planned- a voyage; You love me with true love and I long for your kiss, And I will beseech for your hand in marriage. Last week I sent you a love-soaked, tear-stained letter, I let go of fate gifted love- reluctantly; This time away, from your touch became harder, O the torture of distance, what of destiny. Fate gifted us, drinking passion from its chalice, Waking flames serving first to increase our ardor; Summer, your sweet roses covered our palace, This time away, from your touch became harder. I look across this wind-blown majestic ocean, Mind turns to epic sadness of our parting hour; I begged then for distance erasing potion, I tried to remain your rock hard castle tower. The desperate, longing look- your beautiful face, Informing me the dire depts that you found this clutch; I reminded you, no distance could our love erase, Or lessen my need to feel your soft, gentle touch. Last week, I sent you a love-soaked, tear-stained letter, Now, board a ship that will take me to my true love; Reading my golden love sent, you will feel better, Never my loving touch shall you be deprived of. _____________________________ December 5, 2015 Tail-Rhyme Co-write with Broken Wings and Robert Lindley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/6/2017 4:55:00 AM
Beautiful tail-rhyme poetry, BW and Robert. Woven together with love and intricacy. And loving spoonfuls of intimacy. Marvelous collab you two. I loved the romantic flair of this write. Love and best wishes.
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Date: 12/6/2015 12:15:00 PM
Broken Wings it was indeed my good fortune and my great pleasure to compose with you and enjoy your fantastic creative abilities and verses penned. I am greatly honored to have written this fine poem with you and truly love your superb and inspiring verses! Any time my good friend.
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Date: 12/6/2015 8:14:00 AM
Hi Constance, once again you and Robert have put on offer a most lovely collaboration. Looking forward to seeing love triumph, finally! ~ Regards // paul
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