One Long Day At the Beach

Sometimes
              it seems to me
That life is like one long day at the beach
If you’re lucky, it starts out sunny
You play and time is of no concern
The world is warm,
                    a happy and beautiful place

The day nudges along
There are some rain showers
                            they come and go
And there’s that darn sun block cream
          Who feels like worrying about that?

So, here’s the sun again
It’s late afternoon, early evening
You’ve had fun all day
But now, you’re not feeling so great
Your skin is burning,
                    Some chills render shivers  

You didn’t use that sun block
At least not enough
And boy, now you are going to pay

If you make it
          You think about the sand, the sea
And the castles you could have built
                 but didn’t
Then, you gather your things 
                                        and move on
Somewhere
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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September 11, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Great use of metaphor Mike...
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September 11, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Thank you Silent One!! Happy Tuesday !!
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September 10, 2018 at 2:54 PM
The ups and downs of life likened to a day at the beach, You're right though the sun doesn't always shine for us. Well written Mike. ( never use sun block either, love the sun but cover up) Tom
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September 10, 2018 at 3:05 PM
Right Tom, it pays off Happy Monday !!!
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September 10, 2018 at 2:50 PM
Hello Mike, if you don't use the sunscreen you will get burned. then have a horrible evening sleeping but you won't sleep because the sunburn will keep you awake all night long. have a nice day my friend.xxxx-oooo. Watch the sun.
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September 10, 2018 at 3:04 PM
Thank you Darlene, Happy Monday xxoo
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September 10, 2018 at 2:10 PM
I didn't use sun block when I was fourteen and got second-degree burns! Now I would look like Frosty the Snowman. Very true write.
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September 10, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Thanks Dale !!
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September 10, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Interesting way to put it Mike. I enjoyed this :)
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September 10, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Thank you Heidi xxoo
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