One Little Thump
One Little Thump
(Ottava-Rima )
Lord can you please give them a little thump
They only need a reality check
It does not have to be a major bump
I'm only asking for a little peck
You certainly don't have to leave a bump
Just enough to cause them to be a wreck
They maybe they can see how others feel
We have feelings also and they are real
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