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One Little Thump

One Little Thump (Ottava-Rima ) Lord can you please give them a little thump They only need a reality check It does not have to be a major bump I'm only asking for a little peck You certainly don't have to leave a bump Just enough to cause them to be a wreck They maybe they can see how others feel We have feelings also and they are real

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2012 8:29:00 PM

MARY, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. :-) Always~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/22/2010 10:28:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Mary. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 11/18/2010 9:13:00 PM

I love this poem Welcome to the soup

Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/18/2010 7:29:00 PM

welcome to the soup my freind nice point here thank you

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/18/2010 3:00:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. any help needed just ask any one.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv..