One Liner- Shallow

If your love for me was the waters on which the Titanic met its epic plunge...nobody on deck would get wet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 10, 2015 at 4:43 PM
Jen, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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December 7, 2015 at 9:06 AM
This is wonderful and well thought of Jen...congrats on your win and a warm welcome to poetry soup!
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December 6, 2015 at 6:54 PM
Hi Jen, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 for your win! Pandita
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December 5, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Well done! Congrats on your win, Jen! Love, Kim
Lamoureux Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 8:32 PM
This is quite clever, an excellent first offering.
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 6:54 PM
What an interesting one!! Congrats on the winners' list.
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December 5, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Congratulations Jen.
Allison Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:23 PM
congrats on your win Jen:-) hugs Jan xx
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December 5, 2015 at 11:27 AM
Jen,,Lovely win.... Love Skat
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December 5, 2015 at 9:15 AM
My wish is your always stay dry in these matters, congrats!
Nance Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 7:51 AM
A well referenced write, grats on your win.
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December 4, 2015 at 8:21 PM
Jen, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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