One Liner

Parents are but two angels united by God for a holy task.



11/07/16
Contest: Give me your best one liner.
Placed: 6
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 3:24 AM
Congrats Sunita, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 5:56 AM
Thanks :) Sunita
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 3:25 PM
Congrats on your win, my friend. I wish all parents were like these angels.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 10:28 AM
Dear Andrea, thanks for going through...I used this line for the opening of the first chapter of my first book "Your Valentine Forever" where a child left orphan cried all her life for a mother and father...:) This book I'll always hold to my heart. Love Sunita
Y. Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 2:12 PM
Hi Sunita, I agree. Congrats on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 10:22 AM
Thanks alexis for going through and true I believe parents become angels one they have a baby because they are the world for he/she. Sunita :)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:22 AM
Congrats to all the winners of this contest and for the marvelous lines we all can read and enjoy here.:) Sunita
A  Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:09 PM
SUNITA, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:20 AM
Thanks Skat for being here to give such good opportunities to everyone to develop their writing skill. Thanks for your nice words. :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 9:15 PM
so precious.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 10:58 PM
Hmmm...parents are..Thanks for going through :)
Chansarkar Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 11:53 AM
Yes parents are angels,lovely line Sunita!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 11:41 AM
True...thanks Sara. :)
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