One Line About Death

Heaven and hell exist: Not all people get beautiful death. 


Contest: Life or death one liner.
Sponsored by: Silent One

Date - 14th October 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 1:08 PM
yes that is so right. Have a nice day my friend.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Reflective...I like this one. It says so much in one line! Well done. :)
Black Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Thanks a lot. Augustus...
Deschler Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 7:49 PM
So true... those who deserve punishment in life will get it in death... You make such a powerful statement with just one line. Well done, Augustus!
Black Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Thank you very much. Augustus..
Canerdy Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 12:35 PM
A 7 for your winning, profound one-liner, Augustus! Janice
Andresen Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 4:39 AM
- WooowW .... a very good one, Augustus - hugs // and congrats :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 7:53 PM
back to say congrats!!
Black Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 11:32 PM
Thanks a lot.
Black Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 11:28 PM
Thanks a lot.
Haight Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 6:33 PM
Very true, Augustus. Congratulations on your placement. Sandra
Black Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 11:28 PM
Thanks a lot Mam.
Dietrich Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 7:46 PM
Sad one on death, Augustus. I hope in the end, we simply get what we deserve.
Black Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 11:32 PM
Yes, Mam.... We hope.
Black Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 11:32 PM
Yes, Mam.... We hope.
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