One Life To Live

My heart yearns to be reciprocated
Every good heart deserves to be loved

The passion is still strong yet dimly lit
Keeping the faith as the fate is growing
I’m feeling faint and falling to my knees
Loss of breath, depth, and height

I'm losing my firm grip slowly letting go
My palms are sweaty, my spirit is frail
Disconnected from the rest of my being
I’m weak, limber...fluctuating high and low

I am invisible, silent like dead flies
Falling from the night's sky like a tear drop
In mine eye, a red river is flowing
You can see lonesome shadows of despair

Hearing cries of help during the midnight breeze
Pain and agony, hurt and betrayal
Blank slate is naive too soon to prevail
Escaped from reality and plumeth...

Buried six feet under with soil and dirt
Ashes to dust like crumbling particles
My soul evaporates into thin air...
Was my identity lost or stolen?

You have one life to live so live it
To the fullest as if it were your last

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/11/2010 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Amanda. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2010 7:15:00 AM
I Like this introspective poetry. It's the great thing about writing poetry - one finds out about one's self and others. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 10/25/2010 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Amanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2009 11:21:00 AM
Yes one life to live, live it to Love's fullest.Welcome to soup. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 12/29/2009 10:09:00 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Amanda. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2009 9:14:00 AM
Good conclusion. Welcome to poetry soup, may you enjoy each moment in our friendship, and may your talent inspire us, as much as any may inspire you. One love.
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Date: 12/28/2009 10:49:00 PM
Very gothic........love it!
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