One Leap Tanka Contest

Climbing the gate fast
The big sign posted says 'Closed';
Beautiful water
summoning my rebellion,
with one leap I'm in the pool
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Song Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Super nice work! Enjoyed your creation. :) gwendolen
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 5:53 AM
Big congratulations on your win Melani love xx
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December 19, 2012 at 8:40 PM
Melani :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 3:59 PM
I really loved it and am very happy it made the list. BIG congrats on your big win.
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December 11, 2012 at 3:16 PM
This one shows a free spirit. ME LIKEY!!
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