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One last tear

Riding distressed air, thoughts wander off Disrupting poise and shaking her resolve As the blue skies yield to darkened clouds And sunny day concedes to advent of dark. Looking for warmth she reaches far back Reminiscing allure of moonlit ambiance When holding hands under luminous stars Amatory vibes twinkled dreamy romance. Not a word he says about impending plight Wrapping around her a reassuring stance, Humming a tune from the sensuous past Looking for sunshine amidst dreary storm. Tomorrow will be the first day of new life As countdown begins to how long he lives. She'll be ready with the will of almighty, Defying death at the entrance of mortality. Much as they try to verbalize what's ahead Silence manifests when words are needed. A kiss of passion says she'll love him always As one last tear sheds in grip of his embrace. February 4, 2019 Placed 1st: Strand choice K contest by Brian Strand Placed 2nd in one last tear poetry contest by Silent One

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Date: 3/21/2020 1:47:00 PM
Vijay, I love the way you use words making magic with them. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 2/18/2019 7:53:00 AM
Lovely, Vijay.
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Date: 2/9/2019 8:36:00 PM
I'm back to say CONGRATS, Vijay! Janice
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Date: 2/9/2019 7:11:00 AM
Back to say" Congratulations on your well deserved win"
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Date: 2/8/2019 12:09:00 PM
This pulls at the strings of our heart, Vijay. Their combined strength will see them through rough patches...maybe there are many more years to be shared! Congrats on your win! Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2019 2:45:00 PM
Thank you Paul. Regards.
Date: 2/8/2019 11:45:00 AM
passing by to greet you, 'congrats, vijay!'.. happy weekend and huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2019 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Nette.
Date: 2/8/2019 10:25:00 AM
Beautiful and full of romantic imagery , Vijay, enjoyed reading.Have a nice weekend and may you have a great Valentine’s Day. hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2019 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 2/8/2019 8:34:00 AM
An embrace to remember. Moving storyline. :)
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Date: 2/8/2019 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Berteena.
Date: 2/7/2019 11:23:00 AM
What a wonderful write Vijay, congratulations...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2019 2:43:00 PM
Thank you Charlie.
Date: 2/7/2019 9:24:00 AM
Very beautiful Vijay. Congratulations.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2019 2:43:00 PM
Thank you Frances.
Date: 2/7/2019 3:18:00 AM
- Vijay, congratulations on your great winning poem ... writing about tears is a sensitive theme :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2019 2:43:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 2/6/2019 6:59:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2019 2:43:00 PM
Thank you Brandy.
Date: 2/6/2019 5:11:00 PM
Very nicely rendered Vijay..Congrats on your win..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2019 2:42:00 PM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 2/6/2019 1:52:00 PM
Its always great when we can overcome tears by having someone there for us... nice verse Vijay.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2019 2:42:00 PM
Thank you SO.
Date: 2/6/2019 7:20:00 AM
Such a deep poetry. Beautifully written. Reads like Winner.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2019 2:42:00 PM
Thank you Supraja.
Date: 2/6/2019 6:33:00 AM
a tear is the circle of love held captive in the salt of the earth beautifully captured in your pen vijay i pray your week is blessed
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2019 2:41:00 PM
Thank you Liam.
Date: 2/6/2019 4:57:00 AM
"One Last Tear" dribbling down the heart.. sorrowful ripples over a "dreamy romance"! No words could eclipse the grace of silence.. No words could restrain the heartfelt flow of "one last year"! Your poetry do not cease to amazingly touch the heart! Always a great pleasure to read.. A great verse and a FAV. as it is a win for me! My warmest regards dear Vijay. Blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/7/2019 11:56:00 AM
Much appreciate your glowing comments my friend..many thanks for your FAVE. Always a delight to read your feedback. Regards.
Date: 2/5/2019 4:30:00 PM
Well done; sad but you've expressed it well. Good luck in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/7/2019 11:54:00 AM
Thank you MLK..appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 2/4/2019 10:21:00 PM
Excellent write, Vijay, forlorn and very engaging.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/5/2019 7:00:00 AM
Thank you my friend--appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 2/4/2019 4:40:00 PM
GReat ambiance in this poem, Vijay. I read it again and realized better its meaning the second time. No wonder it felt so sad!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/4/2019 5:14:00 PM
I'm glad to read your much valued comments..many thanks Andrea.
Date: 2/4/2019 3:37:00 PM
beautifully pensive farewells are hard to accept, vijay... this was amazing!...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/4/2019 5:13:00 PM
Appreciate the kind remarks..thank you Nette.
Date: 2/4/2019 1:58:00 PM
- A new start ... with joy and smile :) - A great poem written with emotions, Vijay - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/4/2019 5:12:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise..appreciate, as always.
Date: 2/4/2019 12:11:00 PM
Very emotional write...departing in sweet sorrow...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/4/2019 5:12:00 PM
Thank you my friend..appreciate your visit and kind remarks.
Date: 2/4/2019 11:53:00 AM
Vijay, this is a moving, excellent piece--written by one of the BEST poets! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/4/2019 2:43:00 PM
You are so kind..much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks, Janice.
Date: 2/4/2019 11:47:00 AM
A truth from which no-one escapes! Blessed the one that accepts it before it comes! Outstanding deep poem that illumines our crossing dear, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/4/2019 2:44:00 PM
Thank you my friend..always appreciate your thoughtful comments.
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