Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

One Last Tear

Riding distressed air, thoughts wander off 
Disrupting poise and shaking her resolve
As the blue skies yield to darkened clouds 
And sunny day concedes to advent of dark.

Looking for warmth she reaches far back
Reminiscing allure of moonlit ambiance
When holding hands under luminous stars
Amatory vibes twinkled dreamy romance.

Not a word he says about impending plight 
Wrapping around her a reassuring stance,
Humming a tune from the sensuous past
Looking for sunshine amidst dreary storm.

Tomorrow will be the first day of new life
As countdown begins to how long he lives.
She'll be ready with the will of almighty,
Defying death at the entrance of mortality.

Much as they try to verbalize what's ahead
Silence manifests when words are needed.
A kiss of passion says she'll love him always
As one last tear sheds in grip of his embrace.

February 4, 2019
Placed 1st: Strand choice K contest by Brian Strand
Placed 2nd in one last tear poetry contest by Silent One

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Angela Crabtree December 2, 2020 at 4:04 PM Such a heartfelt poem, Vijay. Very descriptive. Hope you have a great night :)

Sam Kauffman March 21, 2020 at 1:47 PM Vijay, I love the way you use words making magic with them. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Line Gauthier February 18, 2019 at 7:53 AM Lovely, Vijay.

Janice Canerdy February 9, 2019 at 8:36 PM I'm back to say CONGRATS, Vijay! Janice

Supraja Kannan February 9, 2019 at 7:11 AM Back to say" Congratulations on your well deserved win"

Paul Callus February 8, 2019 at 12:09 PM This pulls at the strings of our heart, Vijay. Their combined strength will see them through rough patches...maybe there are many more years to be shared! Congrats on your win! Regards // paul Vijay Pandit February 8, 2019 at 2:45 PM Thank you Paul. Regards.

Nette Onclaud February 8, 2019 at 11:45 AM passing by to greet you, 'congrats, vijay!'.. happy weekend and huggs Vijay Pandit February 8, 2019 at 2:44 PM Thank you Nette.

Eve Roper February 8, 2019 at 10:25 AM Beautiful and full of romantic imagery , Vijay, enjoyed reading.Have a nice weekend and may you have a great Valentine’s Day. hugs Eve Vijay Pandit February 8, 2019 at 2:44 PM Thank you Eve.

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul February 8, 2019 at 8:34 AM An embrace to remember. Moving storyline. :) Vijay Pandit February 8, 2019 at 2:44 PM Thank you Berteena.

Charlie Smith February 7, 2019 at 11:23 AM What a wonderful write Vijay, congratulations... Vijay Pandit February 8, 2019 at 2:43 PM Thank you Charlie.

Frances Schiavina February 7, 2019 at 9:24 AM Very beautiful Vijay. Congratulations. Vijay Pandit February 8, 2019 at 2:43 PM Thank you Frances.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2019 at 3:18 AM - Vijay, congratulations on your great winning poem ... writing about tears is a sensitive theme :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit February 8, 2019 at 2:43 PM Thank you Anne-Lise.

Brandy Nicole February 6, 2019 at 6:59 PM Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy Vijay Pandit February 8, 2019 at 2:43 PM Thank you Brandy.

Joseph May February 6, 2019 at 5:11 PM Very nicely rendered Vijay..Congrats on your win.. Vijay Pandit February 8, 2019 at 2:42 PM Thank you Joseph.

Silent One February 6, 2019 at 1:52 PM Its always great when we can overcome tears by having someone there for us... nice verse Vijay.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Vijay Pandit February 8, 2019 at 2:42 PM Thank you SO.

Supraja Kannan February 6, 2019 at 7:20 AM Such a deep poetry. Beautifully written. Reads like Winner. Vijay Pandit February 8, 2019 at 2:42 PM Thank you Supraja.

Liam Mcdaid February 6, 2019 at 6:33 AM a tear is the circle of love held captive in the salt of the earth beautifully captured in your pen vijay i pray your week is blessed Vijay Pandit February 8, 2019 at 2:41 PM Thank you Liam.

Besma Riabi Dziri February 6, 2019 at 4:57 AM "One Last Tear" dribbling down the heart.. sorrowful ripples over a "dreamy romance"! No words could eclipse the grace of silence.. No words could restrain the heartfelt flow of "one last year"! Your poetry do not cease to amazingly touch the heart! Always a great pleasure to read.. A great verse and a FAV. as it is a win for me! My warmest regards dear Vijay. Blessings. Vijay Pandit February 7, 2019 at 11:56 AM Much appreciate your glowing comments my friend..many thanks for your FAVE. Always a delight to read your feedback. Regards.

M. L. Kiser February 5, 2019 at 4:30 PM Well done; sad but you've expressed it well. Good luck in the contest. Vijay Pandit February 7, 2019 at 11:54 AM Thank you MLK..appreciate your visit and comments.

Lawrence Sharp February 4, 2019 at 10:21 PM Excellent write, Vijay, forlorn and very engaging. Vijay Pandit February 5, 2019 at 7:00 AM Thank you my friend--appreciate your visit and comments.

Andrea Dietrich February 4, 2019 at 4:40 PM GReat ambiance in this poem, Vijay. I read it again and realized better its meaning the second time. No wonder it felt so sad! Vijay Pandit February 4, 2019 at 5:14 PM I'm glad to read your much valued comments..many thanks Andrea.

Nette Onclaud February 4, 2019 at 3:37 PM beautifully pensive farewells are hard to accept, vijay... this was amazing!...huggs Vijay Pandit February 4, 2019 at 5:13 PM Appreciate the kind remarks..thank you Nette.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 4, 2019 at 1:58 PM - A new start ... with joy and smile :) - A great poem written with emotions, Vijay - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit February 4, 2019 at 5:12 PM Thank you Anne-Lise..appreciate, as always.

Arturo Michael February 4, 2019 at 12:11 PM Very emotional write...departing in sweet sorrow... Vijay Pandit February 4, 2019 at 5:12 PM Thank you my friend..appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Janice Canerdy February 4, 2019 at 11:53 AM Vijay, this is a moving, excellent piece--written by one of the BEST poets! Janice Vijay Pandit February 4, 2019 at 2:43 PM You are so kind..much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks, Janice.

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