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One Last Goodbye

The clock of life signals that I must say goodbye, I utter this with the greatest possible sigh. You have the purest soul on wondrous planet Earth, And have so many good intentions that have so much worth. You don't care what others think of you, Because you always know that your beliefs are truer than true. I wipe off a single tear that rolls down my weary face, As my body begins to signal an end to its enduring race. My breath begins to fall short as the time rapidly passes, I know soon that I will be greeted by the masses. You taught me how to live and learn, I think of you as my lungs begin to flame and burn. I would pick a sparkling star out for you in the dreamy, night sky, Just the thought of leaving you makes me begin to cry. I love you to the moon and back, You stole my heart as I voyage on my final track. I'm sorry to say goodbye, Unfortunately, it's my turn to die. I close my blue eyes for one last time, As I hear the bells of heaven begin to chime.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/19/2016 2:29:00 PM
Jordan Dynes, creative and well done. i enjoyed reading again. skat
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Date: 7/27/2014 6:46:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Jordan. I enjoyed reading this first poem you posted. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:57:00 PM
Jordan, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 7/26/2014 4:16:00 PM
An amazing piece... Full of emotion... sad. Keep writing. Welcome to PoetrySoup. If you leave a comment on some one's poem... It will leave a trail for them to find you...
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Date: 7/26/2014 3:52:00 PM
Beautiful, melancholy, inspirational write that I enjoyed reading! Best wishes.
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Date: 7/26/2014 2:36:00 PM
Your poem's beautiful. Jordan,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/26/2014 9:34:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jordan :) - I choose your first moving written rhyme poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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