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One Last Breath

It was completely dark and blurry Unable to see, the feeling of poking and prodding at me continued “Please,” she said. “I’m starting to worry.” I was falling in and out of consciousness to the sound of a constant beeping The fuzzy feeling was turning bottomless I don’t know if I’ll be okay Or if I will wake up But I try to keep the silence at bay as I cling onto life Keeping it steady, and focusing on breathing and not so much on strife I think back to the first time I heard thunder instead But I’m down to one last breath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/16/2015 4:10:00 AM
Hi Kayla, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/15/2015 2:55:00 PM
Kayla, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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