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One Last Breath

Freezing wind, one last breath before the Spring

        Welcomed warmth the Sun peeks through

                Nature awaits her call...

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Constance La France

February 10, 2011 at 1:49 PM

I just love this and this is a great form, I must give it a try, I think I may have done one before and loved it, ha ha ~~ wonderful

Andrea Dietrich

February 8, 2011 at 10:21 PM

Hey, this one reminds me of a haiku I just read on daffodils toward the bottom of the list of new poems here. Poets are getting in synche for spring with their poetry! NICE. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

February 8, 2011 at 3:55 PM

Winter's last breath can even be felt in Florida today, Sharon. Hope spring comes early for the entire country. Beautifully written kimo. Love, Carolyn