One June Afternoon

The breeze was temperate as we both lay
upon our backs and stared up at blue sky.
Two birds hopped on the grass as if at play,
and buds on untrimmed bushes blushed nearby.

The oak which we reclined beneath was old.
You loved the shade it gave us, so you said,
“I find this tree more valuable than gold.”
I think I laughed at that and shook my head!

Seeing your sweet eyes and bronzed complexion
compelled me to declare, “Well, you must see
obviously my own prized possession!
It’s he who brings eternal love to me -

the one who gave me a new lease on life
in this and every other season - who
has made earth heaven for his loving wife.
I think by now you know that someone’s you!”


Aug 4, 2019
For Michelle Faulkner's "A Summer Day Redo" Poetry Contest
Ten required words used in poem: temperate, buds, lease, possession, heaven, complexion, eternal, gold, untrimmed, shade.
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Chiri Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 6:33 PM
Andrea congrats on your top win!;)
Ibeh Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 6:17 PM
Just beautiful, Andrea:-) Loved this. Congratulations on your great win!
Kauffman Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 5:23 PM
Really lovely setting of the scene and such tender emotion portrayed in words! Congratulations on your top placement!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 2:52 AM
Back to congratulate you Andrea. Well done! : ) xxoo
Proxenos Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 12:45 AM
A brilliant poem Andrea - well done - congratulations - I love it! Hugs, Jenny
Faulkner Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 3:22 PM
What a wonderful love story, Andrea, thanks for entering my contest!
May Avatar
August 20, 2019 at 7:32 AM
Beautifully rendered Andrea...best wishes..
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 4:43 PM
When one finds a soul mate, everything can be withstood if they are by your side. This is a sweet sonnet Andrea. I am sure it will do well in the contest! : ) xxoo
Mcferran Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Wow, terrific use of the word bank... great write, my friend! ;)
Johnson Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 11:04 AM
Just let them think what they may. About how you romantically say. These words you speak from your true heart. No need to infer or tear it apart. <3 :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 3:28 PM
thanks, Les. I totally get what you mean.
Godwin Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 9:41 PM
Such engaging lines of sweetness and love! Loved it ... CayCay
Laurie Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 10:29 PM
G'day Andrea … really enjoyed the flow of your sonnet. The romance and landscape certainly blend perfectly - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Pandit Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 7:23 AM
A splendid June afternoon..sweet conversation engrossed in love..a winning poem you wrote, Andrea.
Horn Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 5:24 AM
How fast and wonderful was the trip? Did you take any pictures and did you put them on Facebook?
Horn Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 5:20 AM
This is really August in Nampa.
Ruwindi Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 1:24 AM
Whoa! this is lovely! Good Luck! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 6:43 PM
It was so well done, that I forgot you had to include ten required words. Beautiful tribute to your marriage, I hope you are home safe from your travels, my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 7:53 PM
I write lots of fantasy stuff,Caren!! this is pure fiction. Yes, I had a safe and wonderful fast trip!
Romios Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 4:05 PM
So wonderfully, romantic, Andrea, Like a scene from a movie.)) Panagiota
Merryman Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 2:58 PM
This is such a sweet write, Andrea! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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