One In a Million

A train of numerous cabins spreading its greasy doors for millions to come in then journey begins from the first emitted smoke controlled by a captain not needing any experience moving in rails with too many diversions. It contains people of similar generation and heading towards the same destination; its speed goes high, engine gets heated giving out temperatures most loved by this mobile and energetic travelers. Chaos reigns, turbulence emerges, seemingly a creation of competition, causing a travel so uneasy. All these inevitably happening, despite all heading towards the same stop. Station after station, the final is reached. After three quarters of a year and only but one unusual passenger exits. Nevertheless, expectant waiters still rejoice because nature has taken its cause.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Mcdaid Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 3:36 PM
very beautifully painted funom excellent pen like the style used on this
Makama Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Thank you so much mcdaid
Sage Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 8:27 PM
yeah, because nature's taken its cause
Makama Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 1:39 PM
Yeah White Sage
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 1:27 PM
- A great poem, Funom - Fill your heart with happiness, inspiration and joy - For you and your family ~ I wish you a wonderful new year - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Makama Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Thank you very much Anne
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