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One In a Million

A train of numerous cabins spreading its greasy doors for millions to come in then journey begins from the first emitted smoke controlled by a captain not needing any experience moving in rails with too many diversions. It contains people of similar generation and heading towards the same destination; its speed goes high, engine gets heated giving out temperatures most loved by this mobile and energetic travelers. Chaos reigns, turbulence emerges, seemingly a creation of competition, causing a travel so uneasy. All these inevitably happening, despite all heading towards the same stop. Station after station, the final is reached. After three quarters of a year and only but one unusual passenger exits. Nevertheless, expectant waiters still rejoice because nature has taken its cause.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/7/2016 3:36:00 PM
very beautifully painted funom excellent pen like the style used on this
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 1:40:00 PM
Thank you so much mcdaid
Date: 1/2/2016 8:27:00 PM
yeah, because nature's taken its cause
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 1:39:00 PM
Yeah White Sage
Date: 1/2/2016 1:27:00 PM
- A great poem, Funom - Fill your heart with happiness, inspiration and joy - For you and your family ~ I wish you a wonderful new year - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 1:38:00 PM
Thank you very much Anne

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