One Hundred Years of Solitude

One Hundred Years of Solitude

Rhyme  of    my    lifetime
Lifetime of solitude free of the chains
Chains   of   our   human   community   so   incendiary
Incendiary, lusty blaze of rose and golden ambitions raging beneath 
Beneath midnight ripples swims danger, preying on unwary
Unwary we entered this world of pains
Pains, mine become rhyme

6/11/16 
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7 lines, chained, abcdcba rhyme
5, 10, 15, 20, 15, 10, 5 syllable count
Call it an "Unbroken Arrow"
For contest:  Titles of Novels
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 4:50 PM
This is the second chained entry that I have come across, Tom...not easy, but you have done pretty well! Congrats on this fine win. Regards // paul
Quigley Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Thanks, Paul!
Kimathi Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 4:53 AM
Congrats Tom, for your placement with this amazing work!! ;-)
Quigley Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 10:24 AM
Thank you, Teddy!
Misra Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 4:30 AM
Congrats on your placement, Tom. My was also a chain poem. ~karam~
Quigley Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 10:24 AM
Thank you, Karam!
Onclaud Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 3:58 AM
this is similar to a wreath poem, but done differently with flair, tom.. thanks for participating in my contest and big congrats!..huggs
Quigley Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 10:25 AM
Thanks, Nette! Great contest idea!
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 6:45 PM
oh, Tom, I almost did a chained invention myself, but it was so darn hard just getting a decent rhyme going I focused on that instead. This is pretty cool. Good luck in this very interesting contest.
Quigley Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 9:06 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Allison Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 12:21 PM
I love the rhyme scheme and shape poem you created - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Quigley Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 2:18 PM
Thank you, Jan! Appreciate the heads-up too.
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