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One Hundred Percent Boomboom

The things you do are not worthy of compliments. I thought even someone like you would have more sense. Sometimes I wish you would stay on the other side of the fence. Inside your cranium, there does not appear to be much room. That is why you have always been a boomboom. So often, you would display a puerile scene. Nobody else I know would break a slot machine. Your impetuous action was something not too keen. Inside your cranium, there does not appear to be much room. That is why you have always been a boomboom. Nobody likes it when you rant in a vociferous way. Your deleterious actions seem to be here to stay. Nothing has ever changed. It’s the same from day to day. Inside your cranium, there does not appear to be much room. That is why you have always been a boomboom. Whenever it is payday, you run off to a casino. You disregard your bills and obligations, and off you go. In no time at all, you no longer have any dough. Inside your cranium, there does not appear to be much room. That is why you have always been a boomboom. The way you act in public appears bizarre and strange. The family and few friends you have are treated like small change. Is there a possibility your brain we can rearrange? Inside your cranium, there does not appear to be much room. That is why you have always been a boomboom.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/11/2014 10:58:00 AM
It appears I was correct, congrats!
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Date: 5/10/2014 11:59:00 AM
Not familiar with your use of boomboom. I looked it up and found various references, none of which seemed to apply to the context. In any case, well constructed rhyme and meter and you actually followed the rules. Congratulations on the fine slam and your placement!
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Date: 5/10/2014 5:15:00 AM
Beautiful way to slam Robert ! Congrats on great win !
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Date: 5/9/2014 2:25:00 PM
Wonderful slam. I loved it. Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest Robert. You slam. Verlena
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Date: 5/7/2014 6:18:00 PM
Marvelous slam Robert...You out did yourself here
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Date: 5/7/2014 4:35:00 PM
excellent slam! good luck in the contest...
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Date: 5/7/2014 9:17:00 AM
Fantastic! I expect to see tis one on the winners list. Gambling is a horrible addiction that leads many to poverty.
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