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One Heart

Our Dreaming As one heart Love story time Life will marry these two hearts as one heart. The book will tell the love story of youth How they became one Just us two Marry Kiss Date Written: 8/11/2020 Picture # 2 http://www.howmanysyllables.com

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2020 3:35:00 AM

- A sweet one, Paula :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2020 9:28:00 AM

Thanks for your note and your good luck. So glad you it. Enjoy your day with a hug..............

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/13/2020 4:21:00 PM

I have never attempted one of these but, I believe you have it pinned down well.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2020 9:27:00 AM

Thanks for your note. So glad you like this one. This is the first one for me. It was hard but fun to do. Enjoy your day...................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/11/2020 7:11:00 PM

So sweet! Love that 'kiss' in the last line! Nothing could be finer! Thanks, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/11/2020 7:21:00 PM

Thanks for your note. So glad you like this one. A kiss at the end is always good. Enjoy writing away...................