Notes About The Poem

One Fine Day

a garden party
a flower celebration
goldfinch gathering

the shadows are gone
warm sun is touching the ground
butterflies drifting

all birds are singing
blooms and trees dance to the sound
cobalt skies grass green

the bees are humming
and feasting on red berries
color movement joy
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Zahid Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 5:24 AM
A beautiful peaceful day... Well penned
Buehler Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 8:32 AM
Thank you, Paghunda. :)
Babbit Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 7:52 AM
Anxiously waiting on those moments when all the birds, sun and warm return.
Buehler Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 10:16 AM
The snow is melting here, and forecasters say it will be melting all week. Hooray! :=)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 4:31 AM
Goldfinch gathering! Have a lovely day!
Buehler Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 12:18 PM
You're a delight, Kim. Thank you. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 11:10 PM
And it was a lovely day to dream about. Wonderful imagery. ~~
Buehler Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 12:22 PM
Many thanks, Victor. :=)
Wolf Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 7:28 PM
'Cobalt skies' -- stunning image there, Evelyn. Really cool. Write on, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 8:32 PM
I'm certainly happy that you enjoyed the view. Thank you for saying so. Power to the poets, Evelyn
Y. Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 6:22 PM
WoW! Evelyn, You didn’t have to use the word “ Spring” for your reader to know that you are describing Spring. Your content and imagery are so beautiful. It is one fine day indeed. I enjoy your poetry, my friend; I’m a fan. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 6:51 PM
Thank you, dear Alexis. Your appreciation inspires me so. I am so honored that you took away something of value from my creation. Please have a lovely evening yourself. :) Evelyn
Pettit Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 5:51 PM
What a fine poetic description of spring. As cold as it has been, I can't wait for it.
Buehler Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 6:56 PM
Your enjoyment of my poem brings me smiles. Thank you for letting me know. :=) Evelyn
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