One Final Request From the Fallen Heroes.

Stark sentinels of stone, standing silent, alone.
Their comrades reflect past a speaker's dry drone.
Can cold comfort be said to these young valiant dead?
Who bequeath to us more than a safe secure bed?
Scarred, battered bones, in hushed solemn tones,
whisper one last request meant for our ears alone:

The bars in the flag shine crimson and snow.
They call out to us the rights they bestow.
Seek out every star, set midnight in blue.
Be worthy of us as we were of you.

They kept unspoken dreams, yet dark destiny deems
they can never live out, blown apart at the seams.
These stray measures of flesh that no longer will mesh,
are gathered beneath us in mounds green and fresh.
Do not shudder in dread at their crude muddy beds.
Let the living demand that what follows be read:

Here stands a sanctum where courage can roam.
These were the tools for our freedom at home.
Such love of their brethren can never be known.
Heroes lie here from whence free men are sown.

The bars in the wind snap crimson and snow.
They cry out to us the gifts they bestow.
They are every star, set midnight in blue.
Be worthy of us as we were of you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Gerard. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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November 10, 2010 at 5:05 AM
Congrats Gerard on having this poem selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest luv.. good luck in the next phase ...
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November 9, 2010 at 7:16 PM
Such a touching poem to read as Veterans Day approaches, Gerard. Congrats on making it through the first round of the Soup contest! Love, Carolyn
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November 8, 2010 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Gerard. Love, Carol
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November 7, 2010 at 3:49 PM
Congrats Gerard on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all my friend this happy Sunday with luv... how's football Sunday been for u luv?
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March 22, 2010 at 2:08 PM
Excellent write, strong message Congrats on placing! My dad is in the Presidio in SF- there are thousands of plain white headstones lined up between the oaks. As if to say "we are all fallen brothers, we love the great land" thats why I didn't call it Captain D.H. White because they all fought together. I probably cried five min. to write those 12 words in that sernryu
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August 13, 2009 at 2:33 PM
Nicely written poem! It's powerful and yet soft and elegant at the same time. I think if I was in the mood, even a tearful poem. Congratulations on your deserved placement in the contest.
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August 12, 2009 at 12:31 AM
Congrats on your success in Matt's contest Gerard.Rgds Brian
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August 11, 2009 at 2:12 PM
Congratulations on placing in the contest! Wonderful story, one none of us should forget. ~Trudy~
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August 10, 2009 at 11:29 PM
Gerard congrats on placing in Matts contest, MJ
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July 14, 2009 at 8:43 AM
Just to say Gerard I airmailed your prize this morning.Rgds Brian
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July 12, 2009 at 12:51 AM
Beautiful inner poem in stanza 2 Gerard.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Brown Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 7:33 AM
Bravo on an outstanding poem this morning Gerard. Been awhile again since I have read anything of yours. Always an enjoyable read though when I do. Love, Carol
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