Home » Poems » Black Eyed Susan » One False Move

One False Move

Navigating your 
Bad mood is like walking blind
into a mine field


7/5/11

peoplefree verse

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Judy Ball

July 8, 2011 at 6:36 PM

Ooooooo! Been there and done that. My husband can take things wrong so you have to measure what you say and make sure he hears it right. He is also hard of hearing. Senility can be a witch. God Bless, JB

Jack Horne

July 7, 2011 at 10:35 AM

Wow, a seriously powerful write, Susan. Thanks so much for the telepathic hugs for Sue : )

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 7, 2011 at 8:55 AM

You definitely got that right, Susan! yup, one false move indeed and yikes! Really like this one!

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 7, 2011 at 5:46 AM

What more could I ask for today? It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. I am reading your poetry in which you share a little of yourself maybe without even realizing it you have written from your soul. Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry with us Susan. Love, Carol