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For the Refrain in 8 poetry contest Sponsored by Joesph May ( 4 line stanzas, 16 total lines, 8 syllables per line, rhyme scheme: aabB,ccbB,ddbB,eebB.)
Tiny pink flower, so alone, In verdant fields, how you've grown. No hands to nourish, none to tend, We all long for one faithful friend. Just a single cloud in the sky, Waiting for a mate to float by. Grey rain gathered by sighing wind, We all long for one faithful friend. Brown pup struggles to thrive, to live, All others lost, has love to give, Must find that One's torn heart to mend. We all long for one faithful friend. She sat, lonely, while crowds rushed through. Young hearts break so easily too. Cold, wet nose, she looked down, grinned! We all long for one faithful friend!

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Date: 3/11/2025 7:40:00 AM
Beautiful expressions you've made here. I have two: My God and my wife. Loneliness is one of the hardest things in life, I think. Have a great week Crystol
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Date: 3/8/2025 8:07:00 PM
This is an outstanding poem/piece my dear poet friend Crystol. I love everything in your poem, flow, form, beautiful uplifting/inspiring messages, etc. To my fave. A winner for me. I love and enjoyed immensely. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/10/2025 8:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Len! How encouraging! God bless you too! Xo
Date: 3/7/2025 7:35:00 AM
Dear Crystol, What beautiful encouraging words of loneliness and hope! Friendship's warmth can bloom unexpectedly, healing even the most isolated hearts. Truly touching of the soul! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/10/2025 8:00:00 AM
Thank you so much! Xo

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