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Example for my contest.

One must choose between two lovers. In this poem two woman have fallen madly in love with the same man. He can only choose one to live with for the rest of his life. He loves them both but one heart unfortunately will be broken.

for love, three hearts yearn into the sunset...two ride one heart dies, alone A love triangle tween three yearning hearts Two have moved on, sadly, one departs

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/27/2019 1:57:00 PM

You provided an excellent example, Charlie. The required words have been giving me fits, but I keep trying and I've seen some wonderful entries for your contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Charles Messina
Date: 2/28/2019 8:51:00 PM

I have the utmost confidence that you will do a wonderful job on this, Carolyn. Good luck...I'll be patiently waiting to read your entry :)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/26/2019 9:44:00 PM

Good form to complete a theme. New Idea. "ll try.

Charles Messina
Date: 2/28/2019 8:54:00 PM

Awesome, Anisha...Can't wait to read yours :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2019 3:54:00 PM

great story you told with this form, charlie!! Gotta try one

Charles Messina
Date: 2/28/2019 8:55:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea... This time, MAKE SURE YOU ENTER IT...LOL Good luck!

Aditi Sheemar

Date: 2/25/2019 11:16:00 PM

few words and complete story! beautiful.

Charles Messina
Date: 2/28/2019 8:56:00 PM

Thank you, Aditi :)

Juliet Ligon

Date: 2/25/2019 8:28:00 PM

Creative idea with the number sequence and significance.

Charles Messina
Date: 2/28/2019 8:56:00 PM

Thank you, Juliet :)

Constance La France

Date: 2/25/2019 11:20:00 AM

Charlie, this is a beautiful idea for a new form, I love it and your poem is so deep and sort of sad, hope I can write you something worthy for your contest.

Charles Messina
Date: 2/28/2019 8:57:00 PM

Thank you, Constance...Can't wait to read yours. I am sure it will be worth the read. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2019 7:58:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina
Date: 2/28/2019 8:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, Anna-Lise :) hugs// always :) Charlie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/25/2019 5:53:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work/idea for the new contest. Thanks for the honor of placing in your previous contest. I appreciate you reading and finding my work worthy of placing. Sara

Charles Messina
Date: 2/25/2019 6:19:00 AM

Thank you, Sara. you are most welcome. Good luck with this challenging form. Thank you also for your kind words. Charlie :)