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Example for my contest.

One must choose between two lovers. In this poem two woman have fallen madly in love with the same man. He can only choose one to live with for the rest of his life. He loves them both but one heart unfortunately will be broken.

One Dies

for love, three hearts yearn 
into the sunset...two ride 
one heart dies, alone 

A love triangle tween three yearning hearts 
Two have moved on, sadly, one departs

lovehaiku

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Carolyn Devonshire

February 27, 2019 at 1:57 PM

You provided an excellent example, Charlie. The required words have been giving me fits, but I keep trying and I've seen some wonderful entries for your contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Charles Messina

February 28, 2019 at 8:51 PM

I have the utmost confidence that you will do a wonderful job on this, Carolyn. Good luck...I'll be patiently waiting to read your entry :)

Anisha Dutta

February 26, 2019 at 9:44 PM

Good form to complete a theme. New Idea. "ll try.

Charles Messina

February 28, 2019 at 8:54 PM

Awesome, Anisha...Can't wait to read yours :)

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2019 at 3:54 PM

great story you told with this form, charlie!! Gotta try one

Charles Messina

February 28, 2019 at 8:55 PM

Thank you, Andrea... This time, MAKE SURE YOU ENTER IT...LOL Good luck!

Nisha Dhaka

February 25, 2019 at 11:16 PM

few words and complete story! beautiful.

Charles Messina

February 28, 2019 at 8:56 PM

Thank you, Aditi :)

Juliet Ligon

February 25, 2019 at 8:28 PM

Creative idea with the number sequence and significance.

Charles Messina

February 28, 2019 at 8:56 PM

Thank you, Juliet :)

Constance La France

February 25, 2019 at 11:20 AM

Charlie, this is a beautiful idea for a new form, I love it and your poem is so deep and sort of sad, hope I can write you something worthy for your contest.

Charles Messina

February 28, 2019 at 8:57 PM

Thank you, Constance...Can't wait to read yours. I am sure it will be worth the read. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 25, 2019 at 7:58 AM

- A lovely poem, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

February 28, 2019 at 8:59 PM

Thank you so much, Anna-Lise :) hugs// always :) Charlie

Sara Kendrick

February 25, 2019 at 5:53 AM

Enjoyed reading your work/idea for the new contest. Thanks for the honor of placing in your previous contest. I appreciate you reading and finding my work worthy of placing. Sara

Charles Messina

February 25, 2019 at 6:19 AM

Thank you, Sara. you are most welcome. Good luck with this challenging form. Thank you also for your kind words. Charlie :)

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