One Day On the Beach

I saw the sun and damn it was bright As it broke through the morning and cancelled the night It painted the heavens a soft pastel glow With orange and pink now stealing the show It shone on the water reflecting the blue The beach wore a tint that was shiny and new Then climbed in the sky throwing heat to the ground Where so little shade anywhere could be found It strolled on its path as it went on its way Bringing its light till the end of the day Then in a show of spectacular sight It bid farewell to the returning night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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October 6, 2021 at 5:46 PM
I just saw this now, after a busy day. It was a joy to read. I love it. :)
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October 6, 2021 at 10:39 AM
Wow! Chris, Your poem is so well written. You painted such a beautiful picture with your words. The content and imagery were outstanding. I have missed your poetry, my friend. Excellent job:-)Alexis
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October 6, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Hey Alexis, thanks so much my friend for stopping by
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October 6, 2021 at 10:30 AM
This is so melodic as if it could be a lyric. It painted the heavens a soft pastel glow With orange and pink now stealing the show My favorite lines just breathtaking love.
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October 6, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Thank you so much Karen.
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