One Day I Got Married

I woke up one morning, with the smile on my face.
I saw a beautiful young lady in front of the mirror.
She is wearring a pearl white gown.
I stared at her and look around her grace.
Though she's shining like a star,
I can't see a glamour on her self.
Then the crystal water started to flow from her eyes.
I asked myself why...
Every woman dreams to meet her shining armor.
But this lady found a knight with rotten soul.
Walking in the aisle is like heading a death row.
A final moment to put a self in dungeon.
The wedding ring became a chain on her neck.
Wishing all the flowers are tulips and lilies.
A crown for a mourning event.
'Cos I know this day isn't gonna be splendid.
This is the final moment of defeat.
Like a bird broke its wings ,then caged.
More years gone, a new day arose.
I look in front of a mirror.
I saw a pretty young woman,
Reminiscing the day when she worn a gown.
When I checked out the record in their files.
The marriage was void and nulled.
Is it faith that plays a role this time?
Or the world faved to unlock the chain from his hands.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/24/2018 10:01:00 PM
Amazin'.... #milbertsalmasan
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Date: 4/10/2014 8:47:00 PM
this is very sad one. is it based on your own reality? not sure I understood but the marriage was nullified? I enjoyed reading this.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/11/2014 6:59:00 AM
Yes, Andie.. it's a real story of my life... After attending a ceremony and all that, I found out that the marriage was nullified, due to lacking of documents.. ..ah, long story... but it happened.. hehe... Thanks for the visit and kind comment, lovely Andie!!! ^__^
Date: 4/10/2014 12:55:00 PM
- It sounds both lovely and sad - Bound with a ring for all eternity ... is she is happy ... is she loved .... no one will know the answer - A skilled written poem dear friend, AiyaH ! - <3 <3 <3 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/10/2014 2:02:00 PM
its a song from Canadian singer, AVRIL LAVIGNE,, :"))
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2014 2:00:00 PM
- HAPPY WEEKEND !! (AVRIL ?)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/10/2014 1:54:00 PM
... " all this time we are pretending, so much for my happy ending...ooh.. ooh... " _AVRIL_ Happy weekend ,Anne!!! :"O))
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2014 1:25:00 PM
I love fairytales.................especially with happy ending :))
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2014 1:22:00 PM
- You have completely right about that - you are young and wise!! // huggs :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/10/2014 1:19:00 PM
THank you ,Anne for reading and commenting on my poem; ... I think marriage must be done with security and assurance... for LOVE, FAITH and TRUST w/ touch of close friendship...but w/o these,and when the marriage is done because it's just "needed" .. it'll be worthless.. :"))
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/10/2014 1:19:00 PM
I still believe in fairytale story ..:')))
Date: 4/10/2014 12:40:00 PM
How perfectly you describe this happiness. I love it!!! So profound. Great write, AiyaH. Beautiful words and beautiful flow. have a wonderful week. ~Juli-Michelle
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/10/2014 12:54:00 PM
Thank you ,Julie... :o)) I'm happy for your visit and comment!! ^__^ Happy weekend ,too :'o)
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