David Crandall Poet Rhyme

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1/30/2026 for Let's minichu on flowering Poetry Contest sponsored by Mohan Chutani 

One Day for the Sun and a Flower

The morning sun arose,
"When the shyest flower blossoms, my day is done", 
he'd disclose. 

"Am I to be 
a happy and radiant sun?
Let's see...

With whom 
will I have fun?
Bloom!"

The morning sun arose - 
a happy and radiant sun!
Bloom!

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Eve Roper March 11, 2026 at 3:43 PM love the feelings and imagery in your poem. David Crandall March 12, 2026 at 6:37 PM Thanks, Eve - good to hear!

Karen Jones February 28, 2026 at 8:43 PM Congratulations on your top win David! Great job! David Crandall March 1, 2026 at 7:38 PM thanks, Karen!

Sam Kauffman February 28, 2026 at 5:37 PM David, congratulations on your trophy win with this creative write! You have written a masterful piece in this challenging format. I love the dialogue. Sending you many blessings. David Crandall March 1, 2026 at 7:38 PM Thanks, Sam! Yup, it is challenging!

Christuraj Alex February 27, 2026 at 4:02 AM Wow! A wonderful work. Congratulations! David Crandall February 27, 2026 at 8:17 PM Thanks, Christuraj!

Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2026 at 11:57 PM You are in a flowery mood lately . Way to go with your win here. I hope I can get at least one trophy this whole year! David Crandall February 27, 2026 at 8:17 PM Haha, yep, well, partly because of the contest prompts! You will!

Anisha Dutta February 26, 2026 at 8:46 PM BIG CONGRATS David to win TOP. HAVE Good Days. David Crandall February 27, 2026 at 8:13 PM Thanks so much Anisha!

Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2026 at 6:21 PM Goes round and round with its uplift! Congrats on first place! David Crandall February 26, 2026 at 6:26 PM Thanks, Kim!

Mohan Chutani February 26, 2026 at 3:12 PM David, thanks for participating in my contest. Your twist in third stanza was superb. Congratulations for your placement. Best. Mohan. David Crandall February 26, 2026 at 6:25 PM Wow - thanks, Mohan! I appreciate it - it was fun to participate!

sara Etgen-Baker January 30, 2026 at 5:29 PM outstanding! best wishes with this contest entry. David Crandall January 31, 2026 at 5:00 PM Thanks, Sara!