One Day

One day my words will be celebrated.. They'll be heard- Even in death- They will be big nd bold Strong nd fierce They will be seen.. Touched.. Felt.. One day.. You'll feel wat I write- nd say .. One day .. You'll smell the dust in my old paper.. Taste the salt in my teary ink .. One day ... One day .. My words will be great ., My words will determine your fate One day- ... One day ..

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Christine Phillips

Date: 9/11/2013 2:35:00 PM

Nice. I like the rhythm that is created with the repeated use of the term one day.

Susan Benjamin
Date: 9/11/2013 2:41:00 PM

Thank u :D

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/16/2013 8:31:00 AM

Yes - that is for sure. One day all this will happen. One day the words we write - someone will read and someone will hear. Thanks for sharing.. Lucilla

April Gabriella

Date: 8/13/2013 3:08:00 PM

I like this! I hope the same for my words. :) Nicely done.