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One Day One day I had some problems. I didn't know what to do. A friend came and told me, I know someone that can help you. He will take your problems away, JESUS is His name. I told her - I know that what you tell me - you do for my own good, but my life is full of sin and forgive me - I don't think He would. My friend told me - come with me, don't be afraid. When you come to see him - your sins He'll take away. Now I follow JESUS and I'm inviting you too. If you have sins and problems - you must go and see Him too. Your sins - He will wash away and your problems He will fix. Don't take too long to go. don't carry anymore a burden soul....
05/02/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/7/2013 4:20:00 PM
Hi Lucy, stopping by this poem again:-) This is very a nice poem about pin pointing the thoughts we need to see. God Bless~ LINDA
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Date: 5/6/2013 12:00:00 PM
Lucilla, that is the perfect advice for someone to follow, HE never lets anyone down! Excellent! Thank you!
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Date: 5/5/2013 9:45:00 AM
Very strong poem on faith. I too believe it. Thanks...........,loved always, bl
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Date: 5/5/2013 7:26:00 AM
I truly admire you for your faith! Hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 5/5/2013 1:57:00 AM
Very strong write and inspiring...thank you sweet friend Lucilla...wishing you a very best blessing day <3
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Date: 5/5/2013 1:50:00 AM
Powerful message/invitation. Great poem.
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Date: 5/4/2013 10:19:00 PM
excellent. God is always great. Nice write, Tfs
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Date: 5/4/2013 9:01:00 AM
GOD IS AMAZING AND WONDERFUL. HIS WORDS AND HANDS ARE ALWAYS THERE TO HOLD US.
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Date: 5/4/2013 5:09:00 AM
Great testimony of your faith..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the visit..Your review of my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 5/3/2013 3:51:00 PM
Such a lovely testimony... thank you....
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Date: 5/3/2013 3:06:00 AM
Thank you for your deep and touching poem my friend Lucilla. - Really nice to read your work, always ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/2/2013 9:46:00 PM
Oh How I agree with you my friend! This is such a true and factual statement! I just wish everybody knew what we know, and believed as well do Lucilla! We would have a lot of people in heaven in the future, but I'm afraid that there are fewer and fewer that are making it! It hurts me to see those unbelievers and yet I'm still silent at times...we need to go out and help those that are worse off than we are! Just like your poem has said, do for others! What a perfect piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 5/2/2013 9:46:00 PM
Lucy, i know of your friend. thank you for the message in the poem. I know of Jesus, and will follow. Love the invitation... glory is all I will have at the end, and I want to be reunited with THEM... PS... thank you for the HI :-)...LINDA
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