One Day

thorns +thistles are our curse,
bramble +tumbleweed,our chore;
likewise our lives,
streessed with strain,
heartache +pain;
'til resurrection bodies
in a twinkle,one day regain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 2:49 PM
Wonderful to have those resurrected bodies..I need one now..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 1:30 PM
Creative genius Brian ... u have captured the essence of life in this piece luv.. happy weekend..
Wilson Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 8:19 AM
Thanks, Brian. I'm reading this in the morning before I go to work and it is just the thing to inspire the day. Jim
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