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One Day

An unlikely couple with that rare happiness you only see in movies her hand is cupped in his lovingly and his smile is so genuine it could outshine a full moon their conversation is held strictly in their blissful gazes but what they say is obvious for them there is no other existence no other life but the other and even as they grow old gracefully, with now wrinkled smiles there is no couple like them as if he were Adam, and she Eve I watch them daily with hope of a love only to be compared by the difference between the heat of a steaming cup of joe and a glass of ice water dripping with condensation to have bliss like them I would...No, I will be complete One Day

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Date: 1/4/2012 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Angela. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2011 1:17:00 AM
Great poem, Andrea... I didn't want to like it, wanted to find it cheesy... but oh my... it drew me in and churned my curdishness into sweet (unsalted) butter! Many thanks for a write well done!
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Date: 8/13/2011 1:21:00 AM
I mean Angela. Please forgive my blunder.
Date: 8/9/2011 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being once again featured before the final round of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest Angela. The best to you in the contest.
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Date: 8/4/2011 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Angela. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2010 2:33:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Angela. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/22/2010 4:58:00 PM
keep dreaming... sorry-- love is great then it gets old and you have to reinvent it again. But it can work wonderful if you are both willing to work at it.
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Date: 10/22/2010 2:59:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry today .. with its creative theme.. hope u check out the contest page offered to new members ..good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/22/2010 2:20:00 PM
This poem gives the reader something to ponder. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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