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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oLCHXfkGOIw One day we'll all go to the other side of the world where the moon is launched near the stars unfurled We will assemble in the hubble of the milky way and find no trace of earthly bodies in this mainstay; We will hover inside the palindrome of heaven's loft restructure like dancing orbs of light, bouncing off the walls of the sky, born to never be born or die; One day we will escape this crusty earth of touch and leave for a place where we don't need a thing No surgical headlights to see the cavity of man no scalpel to fix a little girl named, Marianne We will find our loved ones smiling on the other side they will be the hinges on the door that leads inside Exhilarated and free we will shine softly in the night. as if we were the only light aglow, far and out of site .

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/24/2021 1:38:00 PM

The joy that awaits us in the afterlife is worthy of celebration! Just think -- no disease, hearts filled with light and love. Wish those who fear death could see things from your perspective, Vie. Beautiful poem! Hugs, Carolyn

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/24/2021 6:46:00 PM

Dear Carolyn , I have been holding on to this perspective for quite some time now. It helped through the loss of my parents, knowing that they were still there watching over me, thank you for dropping in

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/24/2021 11:19:00 AM

Dear Mystic, only your gifted pen could express the expectation of Heaven in such a beautiful way. A glorious penning inspiring soulful comfort and inner peace. Warmest wishes and hugs, my dear friend.. ~Susan

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/24/2021 6:45:00 PM

Dear Susan, if only everyone could find the strength to believe at their death bed that life doesn't end there, there would be more souls relinquishing life on earth , thank you for reading,

Joseph May

Date: 3/24/2021 4:21:00 AM

"Exhilarated and free we will shine softly in the night." A beautiful place Vie, Wonderful write

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/24/2021 10:49:00 AM

Thank you dear Joseph. Love always unites even onto death, :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/23/2021 5:17:00 PM

WoW! Mystic, I would love to live in such a place. It sounds like a place where love and peace will reign. It It sounds like heaven. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/24/2021 10:49:00 AM

Hi Alexis, nice to see you on my page, glad you believe in this kind of heaven too. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/23/2021 4:52:00 PM

it certainly sounds a heavenly place Vie:-) hugs Jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/24/2021 10:48:00 AM

Jan most of us have loved ones on the other side, its comforting to know we will be re connected, even if its only in celestial bodies , thanks for stopping by

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/23/2021 1:39:00 PM

The other side as you describe feels heavenly and peaceful. The best part is we don't need any possessions. Words of enlightenment, Vienna.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/23/2021 4:04:00 PM

I believe there is so much unexplored visions up there, I am certain it doesn't end here. Thank you for stopping by Vijay, :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/23/2021 12:45:00 PM

- That there is more between heaven and earth than we know or can explain ... many are sure that there is something ... what you describe sounds heavenly, Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/23/2021 4:03:00 PM

Thank you Sunshine, I hope that one day we can see all our loved ones over there. Glad you dropped by. xo